Gabriel
Handsomely devilish,
he dimples.
Lights up when she’s around.
Stares with special attention
at the young American woman.
Shared innocuous smiles.
Droplets of snow in her honey hair.
Roving wind in his cerulean eyes.
His Rauchbier voice tempts
until...
She catches a flash of momentary gold.
She catches a flash of momentary gold.
Right ring finger.
Damn these European men.
She has to ask.
Through his darkening grin,
she points to the halo wrapped around his promise:
“In my country that means something.”
Shouldering his eyebrows,
he moves the ring
right,
left,
then right again,
settles it on his left to rest.
Sincerity drips with ambered perfection:
“Itz jest a ring”
I never heard back from you regarding our revisions to this one. I think it holds a great deal of promise, Laura.
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